Oh, and take as much criticism as you can.
It doesn't matter if their review is a long ass essay or several sentences. If it offers ways on how to improve, you should try to do it.
But Flash can accept music longer than one minute. You just must be using bad .mp3 files.
I could probably help you with voice acting for stuff, but I'm not the most reliable guy.
Chdonga
You can't tell a person how to make a decent flash. Pardon me for sounding generic, but good flash comes from the heart. The best advice one can give you is practice. Experiment with the different drawing tools, even try making a sprite flash or two.
If you have a test flash, DO NOT SUBMIT IT! If you /need/ to upload it, you should just post it on your dumping grounds and make a link to it on your news post.
Chrisspy (Updated )
Thanks, man. (Or, would that be woman?)